Doc Yoder's Notes
The Rime of the Ancient Mariner by Samuel Taylor Coleridge (originally published 1798 in Lyrical Ballads; notes here are to 1817 edition in Sibylline Leaves)
Contexts:
- ballads: based on the Mariner what were the traditional ballads like?
- frame tales
- fantastic travelogue (cf. Gulliver's Travels, Odyssey, Marriage of Heaven and Hell)
- the gothic -- one of the kinds of lit WW criticizes in the Preface
Points at which the reader's interpretation is more subtly manipulated:
- ll. 97-102: the 24 hour darkness is a natural phenomenon, but is interpreted as divine retribution; how much of the other signs are really natural
- ll. 220-223: the mariner says that the souls passed him "like" the whizz of his crossbow-- again this is about the mind's making meaning, the simile marks the mariner's subjective association, not an objective fact of the case
The Focus on the Albatross:
Pt. I ends with the shooting of the Albatross
Pt. II ends with the crew hanging the Albatross around the mariner's neck, denying their
supposed complicity
Pt. III ends with the death of the 200 crewman, whose departing souls recall the whiz of the
crossbow that killed the Albatross
Pt. IV ends when the Mariner blesses the sea creatures unaware, and the Albatross falls from his
neck into the sea
Pt. V ends with the mariner in a "swound" and the 2 spirit voices discussing his penance for
killing the Albatross
Pt. VI ends with the mariner's hope that the hermit will shrieve his soul and "wash away / The
Albatross's blood"
Pt. VII
Interruptions on the Mariner's Tale (1817):
Pt. I
- ll. 10-21
- ll. 31-49
- ll. 79-81
Pt. II: None
Pt. III: None
Pt. IV
Pt. V
Pt. VI: None
Pt. VII
- ll. 595-600: apparently the Mariner, but could be the wedding guest
- ll. 621: last line of the mariner's tale
On the author of the gloss
Pt. I
- up to about l. 70, the glosser provides a good summary of the facts of the poem
- the gloss at l. 71 begins the glosser's more revealing interpretation; the glosser is the first to see the albatross as an omen; his interpretation coincides with the crew's at ll. 91-96
Pt. II
- at l. 97 the glosser departs from the crew's interpretation when they become "accomplices" in the Mariner's crime
- l. 120: it is the glosser who claims that the doldrums are a vengeance
- l. 131: the longest gloss yet; the glosser apparently has a variety of obscure knowledge about spirits, and apparently believes in them; also, a pattern becomes visible in which the glosser solidifies certain innuendoes, implications, suggestions, etc. that would otherwise remain rather nebulous
Pt. III
- l. 147: the glosser first interprets the "something in the sky" (the death ship) as a "sign"
- l. 199: the glosser takes up a regal metaphor: "No twilight within the courts of the sun"
Pt. IV
- l. 230: the glosser first sees the events on the ship as "penance"
- ll. 236-243: some room for play between the gloss and text
- l. 263: the long, elaborate gloss about the journeying sun and moon who enter their native lands like lords; royal metaphor, astrology?, a least a personification of the heavenly bodies
Pt. V
- l. 297: the glosser agrees with the Mariner's interpretation of the rain as being sent from the Virgin Mary
- l. 345: the glosser on the inspiriting of the dead men, adds that the spirits were "sent down by the invocation of the guardian saint"
- l. 377: the glosser adds that the spirit still "requireth vengeance"
- by l. 393 the glosser has demonstrated a facility with the various realms of spirits, daemons, etc.; is this person typical of certain religious sects?
Pt. VI
- ll. 422-429: the glosser seems to reverse the cause/effect; the poem says that the ship will go more slowly when the Mariner comes out of his trance; the glosser says that the trance is caused by the motion of the ship
- l. 430: the glosser interprets the Mariner's trance as a respite from his penance; this suggests that the penance is perceptual rather than objective
- l. 482: the glosser anticipates the action by about 2 stanzas
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