Doc Yoder's Notes
These notes are to the 3rd edition. Because of the diversity of published texts, I have not included page numbers for the quotations.
Frankenstein by Mary Shelley (1st ed. 1818; 3rd ed. 1831)
Letters 1-4: sets in place the frame; ambitious, not quite Satanic Robert Walton trying to find the Edenic North pole; almost explicitly a commentary on the Ancient Mariner and the Wedding Guest
Chap. 1: Victor's youth; intro Elizabeth w/ foreshadowed death
- Letter 1: Ambition
- Letter 2: loneliness; Walton has not left land yet; Walton compares himself to the Ancient Mariner
- Letter 3: They have shipped out
- Letter 4: They spot the creature; pick up Victor; what distinguishes Victor: his penetration and his eloquence
Chap. 2: intro Clerval; Victor's studies in Natural Philosophy (Cornelius Aggrippa, Paracelsus, Albertus Magnus), interest in elixir of life and in raising ghosts; the first image of the "blasted stump"
Chap. 3: Victor's mother dies; Victor goes to school at Ingolstadt, meets M. Krempe and M. Waldman; Waldman talks of "penetrat[ing] into the recesses of nature and show[ing] how she works in her hiding places"
Chap. 4: 2 yrs. pass; Victor discovers the secret of animation; plans for the creature (make it big to make the work easy); Victor's Satanic ambitions to Godhood; Victor claims to have no supernatural horrors -- perhaps he has no religion?
Chap. 5: it lives! Victor's dream of Elizabeth becoming his dead mother -- killing and bedding the mother; Victor flees the creature, runs into newly-arrived Clerval, has a hallucination of the creature, faints for 6 months
Chap. 6: letter from Elizabeth introduces Justine Moritz to the reader; Victor's revulsion at scientific instruments or discussion; Victor recovers; foreshadowing of Clerval's death
Chap. 7: murder of William; Victor sees the creature in Geneva; Justine is accused; 2 yrs. since the creature was animated; 6 yrs. since Victor went to Ingolstadt
Chap. 8: Justine's trial, "confession," and execution; the Frankensteinian rhetorical sublime
Chap. 9: a pause after Justine's execution; Victor goes to Chamounix, Switzerland and Mount Blanc
Chap. 10: Victor and the creature meet; the Creature claims rights to Victor's duty as creator
Chap. 11: Creature's Tale 1: awakening; fire; hostility in the village; the hovel at the De Lacey's; the creature mixes imagery of Pandemonium (the shepherd's hut) with imagery of Paradise (the hovel) -- is he Adam or Satan? he can't decide; the creature's dawning sensibility at the life of the De Lacey family
Chap. 12: Creature's Tale 2: 1st winter with the De Laceys; discovers language/writing; the mystery of the family's melancholy; Creature sees himself reflected in a pool; he starts doing odd-jobs for the family
Chap. 13: Creature's Tale 3: the arrival of the Arabian, Safie, provides an opportunity to learn language; he also learns history from Volney's Ruins of Empires; recognizes his lack of parents or mate
Chap. 14: Creature's Tale 4: The DeLacey family story, including the ingratitude of Safie's father (the Turk), and the ruin of the DeLacey family fortune
Chap. 15: Creature's Tale 5: his books (Paradise Lost, Sorrows of Young Werther, Plutarch's Lives, and Victor's journal); creature reveals himself to the DeLacey family; -- good contrast between PL's story of creation of Adam and Victor's journal record of creation of creature; begin shift from focus on father/son relationship to desire for a mate
Chap. 16: Creature's Tale 6: the De Laceys flee; creature gets shot rescuing a girl; the murder of William and framing of Justine; creature asks for a mate; creature also assumes sometime of Victor's role, attempting to "reanimate" the little girl, "creating" desolation by killing William
Chap. 17: after some negotiation, Victor agrees to create a female; cf. PL 8:355ff.; creature's vision of his Paradise
Chap. 18: Victor delays marrying Elizabeth; goes to England w/ Clerval; foreshadows death of Clerval
Chap. 19: tour of Oxford, the Lakes, and Edinburgh, until Victor separates from Clerval in Scotland, goes to the Orkney Islands, and finally the work proceeds; Victor is increasingly isolated as a result of his knowledge; Victor:Clerval::WW:Dorothy
Chap. 20: Victor destroys the half-formed woman, dumps the body, drifts to Ireland and is charged w/ murder; lots on the traffic in women
Chap. 21: Victor's hearing for the murder; the corpse is Clerval (of course); more delirium; Victor's father arrives; Victor is acquitted; heading home
Chap. 22: Victor returns to Geneva and marries Elizabeth; foreshadowing death of Elizabeth
Chap. 23: Murder of Elizabeth; father wastes away; more delirium; Victor tells his tale the first time (very mariner-like); police won't help (surprise!); hatching a plan to hunt the creature
Chap. 24: the last chapter, slips back into Walton's journal; Victor's "marriage vow" with the creature; Victor asks Walton to take up his quest
Back to Walton's journal / letter to his sister*************************************
- Victor gives "life and spirit" to Walton's notes
- Victor explicitly -- and finally? -- compares himself to Satan
- As the ice thickens and threatens, Walton starts to learn for Victor, saying "it is terrible to reflect that the lives of all these men are endangered through me"
- Victor dies, but he still just doesn't seem to get it, doesn't understand the interrelatedness of his problems
- Creature laments Victor, too late asks for forgiveness
Topics for Consideration
The following groupings suggest a structure for the novel. The first section of the book is concerned with Parenting; Victor had good parents who set a good example for him, but also spoiled him. The Creature's Tale shows the results of Victor's bad parenting. In the final section, the focus shifts from parenting to (at least partly) the "Homosocial Traffic in Women" (see, for example, Eve Kosofsky Sedgwick's Between Men: English Literature and Male Homosocial Desire, 1985), in which Victor and the Creature negotiate for possession of a female mate. Shelley uses Adam's speech from Paradise Lost, Bk. VIII to set up the tension: When Adam asked God to make him a mate, what if God had said, "No"?
Parenting:Bridge Passage -- The Creature's Tale:
- Victor's parents
- Victor's Satanic ambitions include comparing himself to a father who could claim complete gratitude from his creation
- Victor flees from the newborn creature
- Creature claims the duties of the creator from Victor, who for the first time feels these duties
- Creature becomes aware that he has had no parenting, no relationship with his creator
- Contrast PL creation w/ Victor's journal
- Notice also how often some element hinges on dead or intolerant/intolerable parents:
- Elizabeth's coming to live w/ the Frankensteins (dead or lost parents)
- Caroline Frankenstein's attendance on Elizabeth during her scarlet fever (she dies as result of her devotion)
- Justine's coming to live w/ the Frankensteins (dead father, and intolerant mother)
Homosocial Traffic in Women:
- Compare the Creature's tale to Adam's tale in Paradise Lost VIII: 250-560 (available here)
- PL VIII: 323-26: the divine injunction against eating the fruit IS, in fact, given to Adam before Eve is created; cf. Victor's fears about the female creature's unwilling to adhere to his deal with the male creature
Gendered Language of ambition/nature: "They penetrate into the recesses of nature and show how she works in her hiding places."
- The contract for exchange of a female
- Victor's father thinks Victor's problem is another woman
- Victor's reasoning for destroying the female
- Creature's asserts his power over Victor -- the issue is now clearly sexual -- and the creature's displacement of the bride: "I will be with you on your wedding night"; Victor's misinterpretation suggests both his own egotism and the homosocial dynamics; indeed,the creature threatens a kind of rape of Victor, in which the "bolt" will fall and "ravish" Victor's happiness
- Cleaning up Eve -- almost like "living flesh"
- Elizabeth suspects that Victor loves another (it's the creature)
- Murder of Elizabeth; Victor's recognition is almost orgasmic, in fact, he faints
- Victor's "marriage vow" with the creature; the creature is "satisfied"
- The creature describes his exchange, his envy of Victor's relationship with Elizabeth
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